Sunday, August 12, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday: NOT THE MARRYING KIND

This week's snippet from NOT THE MARRYING KIND follows Beck and Poppy's wedding reception.

Poppy needs some space, Beck follows her along the Vegas Strip.
He's asking the hard questions she doesn't want to answer, namely how 'real' she wants this fake marriage to be.

“I hate you,” she muttered, indecision pinching the corners of her lush mouth. “But I have to give you points for being up front about what you want.”
“What do you want?”
She hesitated an eternity, gnawing on her bottom lip, before her challenging gaze met his.

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Linda Morris said...

Lots of great tension crackling here. Love it!

Anonymous said...

ooh, yum! Glad she came right out and said it! great tension here...

Silver James said...

Uh oh! Poppy's in for it now! ;-) Excellent six.