While tweaking Starr and Callum's story, here are the 3 main areas my editor wants me to focus on:
1. Characterisation and emotional conflicts (so the reader can follow their motivations and behaviour every step of the way.)
2. Reworking the plot so that it showcases their personalities in the most exciting, pacy, intense way possible.
3. Upping the sensuality levels-steam up the page at every opportunity.
I posted these because it's amazing how as a writer, you may think you have everything covered, yet all it takes is one, small change (in Callum's instance, changing who died in his past and his role in their death) and the rest of the book needs an overhaul.
I revised 4 chapters last night, nothing major. The nitty-gritty stuff is about to start.
Changing his motivation has changed quite a bit.
And that sensuality stuff? They've been too good, keeping their hands off each other.
All about to change...